Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Response

YOu are on the right path. Ilike how you made your connection to the genocide. In future responses make sure you also bring in quotes to help futrther develop your wiritng as well.YOu have also connected to the darkness that exists, which shows you are using the guiding questions in your group. When you say that you are working well in your group you might want to expand a bit more on that by telling me exactly how.

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